uneulogized: ([red hood] standing around buddy.)
Jason Todd ([personal profile] uneulogized) wrote in [personal profile] zerotohiro 2015-06-11 12:25 am (UTC)

[He knows half of what Jason will be doing, which is why he told him that. It's the half that Hiro would be able to put together thanks to the audience. He doesn't point this out, just moving on, as he does. Better to let Hiro think he has the whole story.]

Use less vague words. You have this annoying habit of telling a story in pieces. [Jason does this, too, but he tends to hit a climax in his storytelling.

Hiro never quite gets there before he's pissed off Jason along the way.]

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